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周日唐梦12:先生 [七律]   文/江灵飏    简体 繁体 手机版

Embracing adverse circumstances with a contagious smile, he went out for a walk in the square every unforgiving day. I was with him, of course. We talked as equals even though he was my mentor, and we spent practically all our time on Tang poetry as if nothing else mattered to us. Then one day out of nowhere he brought up Confucianism, regarding which he had this question for me:

"How would Confucius and Mencius resonate with you westerners, if at all?"

"Diogenes springs to mind: Nightfall comes and I am in Athens. I am going to raise my lantern and let every good soul in town join me for the light, for the right."

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先生笑迎逆境,逆境笑迎先生。每与少年小江漫步广场,必畅析唐诗及其时代,不排资,不论辈。某日忽涉儒学,问:

"小江,你们西方人跟孔孟也有共鸣的地方吗?”

"有!(古希腊哲人)第欧根尼如是说:我提灯,要让城中毎一个好人都看到光、都冒出来,尽管雅典已经沉进夜海里去了。”

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先生
儒根黃土鬢眉間,進不縱橫退不閒。同讀九州唯故月,多攻一玉又他山。
層樓強笑辛詞在,前席虛驚賈影還。何處南窗君寄傲?犯寒燕北死春顏。

註:「縱橫」,現代普通話讀zòng héng,縱仄橫平;古韻讀zōng héng,縱平横平,見《詩韻集成》上平二冬部。唐詩例:
魏徵.述懷詩:「縱橫計不就,慷慨志猶存。」
杜甫.戲為六絕句六首之一:「庾信文章老更成,凌雲健筆意縱橫。」

鄉語版 For my fellow Americans
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Sunday Makes My Tang Dream (12):

"Mortal"

Before thaw,
Freezing days win,
And the very last storm
Snows eternity in.

Before harmony,
Lean
Fairies and herons
Play mean.

Before repentance,
Sin
Has yet to get under
The sinner's skin.

Before arrival,
Each milestone pins
The traveler down
Where the last leg begins.

Then a mirage,
No heaven's twin,
Swallows up all dreams
Like a dustbin.

Then sanity,
A margin
Next to a fault line,
Goes razor-thin.

Then the truth,
Given no next-of-kin,
Takes on faith
With a scavenger's grin.

Finally faith,
A larva-jumping bean,
Has a flammable truth within
For the future moth to spin.
(小江)

周日唐梦12:先生  (七律)

儒根黄土鬓眉间,进不纵横退不闲。同读九州唯故月,多攻一玉又他山。
层楼強笑辛词在,前席虚惊贾影还。何处南窗君寄傲?犯寒燕北死春颜。

(小江)
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