颇佳。末句韵味十足。
腰联出句犯。
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When will I be back?
Many times you had asked in vain.
The autumn pond filled,
With the Ba Mountain rain.
I envision the night we can be together,
Trimming the candle by the westward window,
I will tell you all about the time,
When the autumn pond was filled by the Ba Mountain rain.
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